Many people now choose to move out of crowded cities due to many drawbacks of city life. Discuss the disadvantages of living in big cities.

Nowadays, more and more people are choosing to live in metropolises. In
this
essay, drawbacks will be discussed in more depth.
Firstly
, living in big
cities
you will have a high cost of living. The higher cost of living
is
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the
first
disadvantage that people typically think of when considering moving to a
city
. To be specific, normal living expenses like rent and utilities tend to be higher in big
cities
.
Moreover
, parking and laundry, food, beverages, tobacco and petroleum products are
also
more expensive in large
cities
.
Secondly
, living in major
cities
, bad influence on people. In a
city
with a high rate of environmental pollution,
this
affects the lungs, human health. in the same way, in a
city
with a high rate of theft. There are many slums in every
city
, so poor they went to steal and
this
is very dangerous for everyone.
For example
, there are still very dangerous cases of murder and robbery in the newspapers
Last
but not least, lack of privacy. Living in a crowded
city
is a basic necessity of an urban lifestyle.
This
reduces privacy due to the scarcity of space in the context of the
city
. The proximity of buildings, apartments with a common wall, and severely cramped apartments have resulted in greatly reduced space and limited privacy. In conclusion,
although
there are many good aspects to live in big
cities
but
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it could not deniable the drawbacks of living
in
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there.
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