Children have more and more tests and exams to do at school, sometime starting until the age of five or six, right up until the age of eighteen. What are the advantages and disadvantages of making childern do exams?

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it is very important, it must be done very carefully since
children
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beliieved
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doing new tests and learning them can increase
children
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of their life's in fact in the age of
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time for learning
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new
skills because they can not grow up overnight .
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children
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schools
or parents put a lot of pressure on
children
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this
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otherwise
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new skills but to the best of their ability,so
schools
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because
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point of view. in the end,we found
children
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teenagers
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schools
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • assessment
  • systematic
  • evaluate
  • mastery
  • subject matter
  • preparation
  • academic
  • professional
  • frequent
  • disipline
  • time management
  • learning gaps
  • stress
  • anxiety
  • mental health
  • memorization
  • creativity
  • socio-economic
  • disparities
  • disadvantaged
  • resources
  • inequality
  • intrinsic motivation
  • joyful pursuit
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