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Some parents and teachers think that children’s behaviour should be strictly controlled. While some think that children should be free to behave. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Childhood is considered the most critical stage in life. Some
parents
 and
teachers
 believe that
children
's
behaviour
 and actions should be strictly monitored and controlled while others believe that
children
's should be free to behave and take decisions as they like. In my opinion, neither full freedom nor overlooking will benefit
children
's.
Parents
 should monitor their
children
's
behaviour
 to some extent. Though, too many restrictions on
children
's can destroy their brain formations and techniques to handle
problems
. It is vital that
children
's should learn problem-solving skills. If
parents
 and
teachers
 put more pressure and restriction on their child's
behaviour
, they will have no solution in the future for
problems
 that they might face, and that
problems
 might lead to more complications.
Besides
, if the
parents
 and
teachers
 are controlling
children
's at a certain level rather than strictly
control
,
this
 will help
children
's to think on their own and perform better at activities and ameliorate their academics.
However
, it's not advisable that
parents
 and
teachers
 should never
control
 or monitor their
children
's
behaviour
 or activities. Having no
control
 at all can lead to a child's harmful
behaviour
. If they don't know how to obey certain rules/laws/ethics, they can create
problems
.
For example
, if they do not obey some ethics,
such
 as lying or cracking offensive jokes can cause exacerbate
problems
.
Although
,
parents
 can
control
 their child's
behaviour
 at a certain level
that is
 not quite high and low.
This
 will help in their better evolvement. In the conclusion, I believe that both
parents
 and
teachers
 should educate their
children
's on the proper path and
control
 them at a certain level, rather than enforcing them with strict actions.
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