Your neighbours have a dog that is noisy at night. You can’t sleep. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: – describe the problem with the dog – explain why it is important for you to sleep – outline what your neighbours could do about the situation.

Dear Mr and Mrs Sen, Hope you are well. I am writing
this
letter to you in order to discuss
about
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Bruno, your pet dog. He is an awesome and loving creature, but
since
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for

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last
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1 week , he is constantly barking at night.
Hence
, it is disturbing my sleep.
Also
, I think I had discussed with you about my recent
heath
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issue ;
thus
, the doctor suggested
me
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to
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sleep for
atleast
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7-8 hours a day.
Moreover
, if I am not doing that the medicines that I am consuming will have an adverse impact on my health.
However
, I know Bruno for
such
a long time ,and I am aware that he is an extremely
peace loving
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dog.
Hence
, I am afraid that probably something is not correct with him and he is not being able to communicate that.
Therefore
, I would like to suggest that you should visit a
veternary
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doctor and get him
throughly
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thoroughly
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checked. I apologize that I have to write a letter to you regarding Bruno but I hope that you will understand the vitality of my situation.Let me know if you need any assistance. Thanking you. Your neighbour Shreya
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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