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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Whether insightful
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 in industrial or
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 fields should be disseminated widely without any charges or not has been the topic of much debate. In
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 both sides of the argument will be elaborated
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. On the one hand, some hold the opinion that knowledge shared without any cost is beneficial for the world on the grounds that it will enable new possibilities for everyone.
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, reliable
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 findings are backed with evidence and
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 practical measures. If the public, consisting of business owners and researchers, obtain valuable
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 cost-free, they will have the chance to improve their undertakings.
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, once university students access more resources, they could conduct more accurate and thorough researches leading to a rise in fruitful findings in various areas of study.
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, there are those who oppose the aforementioned view
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that much work and funding is required to reach any worthy
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 discovery.
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, disclosing the
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 free of charge is not financially sound, and it could increase scientific fraud and disinformation. According to
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 view, premium access to
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 papers only ensures the reliability of the published data as well as a return on investment for the scientists and the organizations that provide the budgets. To illustrate, scientific journals
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 as JSTOR and Nature allocate some of their revenues to purchase articles and
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 to evaluate them prior to publishing. To draw a conclusion, there are opposing views on the practice of free access to
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 papers. In my opinion, making all scientific data available for the general public and practitioners alike will only result in positive outcomes
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 as more
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 output and innovative productions.
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, some of the concerns on budgeting and faulty
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 can be resolved through government funding and more rigid critical assessments.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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