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Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

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The vast majority of workmen encounter the dilemmas of whether to stay at the same companies for the entire time or frequently change to others. There are various factors that must be taken into consideration before one decides to change their career.
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, remaining at the same
company
 provide promotion and a thorough understanding of the job's tasks, changing workplace trends to have more advantages. 
Individual
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 who work for the same
company
able
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 to gain profound knowledge about all the processes and become familiar with
staffs
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.
relationship
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Relationships
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 are formed between co-workers. get promoted to
the
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 higher position.
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, my friend’s father has been working for the advertising agency, Dentsu Thailand, for almost
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40 years. He got promoted from an ordinary accountant to the chief financial officer, where ten branches worldwide of
company
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the company
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 are under his responsibility. Change environment. Know yourself, find new
competences
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competencies
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.Gain
broad
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 range of experiences. Learn how each organization manage. Meet lots of people with different backgrounds and talents. Despite the fact that working with the same
company
 provides familiarity and
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