The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.

The graph illustrates the varieties of

music

albums

(

Pop

,

Rock

, Classical)

buying

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by the public of Britain with respect to men, women and different

age

groups ranging from 16 to above 45 years.

Overall

the youth crowd between 25 to 34 is more inclined towards

Pop

and

Rock

music

whereas

people above 45 years

seems

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seem

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to be more

in

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into

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Classical

music

.

However

, the percentage of

male

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males

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buying

music

is more than that of

the

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female in all different types. It is seen that the public buying

Pop

and

Rock

music

in the

age

group

16-24 is 30%

whereas

the same

age

group

has bought the lowest of Classical

albums

with less than 5%. The Sales of

Pop

and

Rock

albums

for men

lies

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between 20 to 30% and between 10 to 20% for Women. It seems that Classical

Music

has the majority of the public in the 45+

age

group

with 15 to 20%

albums

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of albums

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sold and the

age

group

between 35-40 consists of around 25 to 30% for

Rock

and

pop

respectively.public between 25-34 are more interested in

Pop

and

Rock

music

albums

with more than 30% of

albums

purchased