Students should focus on learning in the classroom rather than show their status by wearing fashionable clothes. Thebefore, all students have to wear school uniforms. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, we all live in a

competative

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competitive

woorld

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world

.Everyone would like to demonstrate what they have and

wearning

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learning

trend clothes.As long as

schools

created

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for learning purposes but many

students

beside

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aim, try to take their whole attention to fashion like fashion clothes and high-tech gadgets,

however

,uniform in

schools

help

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places to reach their aim.I completely agree

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ith

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this

satement

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statement

that

school

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is only a place for learning and

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experiencing

.

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essay will argue that why in

schools

we should only focus on learning. In the past,

students

had to work to afford their

schools

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equipments

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equipment

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like notebooks and pens but nowadays education

be

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more

convinient

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convenient

, kids can only ask for assets and their

parent

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buy.

students

prepered

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prepared

by each other at

school

and

thats

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that's

why they prefer to seem well.They purchase

fashion

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shoes and

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backpack

and show

off

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to each other,

thus

,

schools

aims become more and more

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disappear

.

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noteworthy is that,if

students

did not wear

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outfit,they would create a

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burden

border

from themselves and others

for instance

if a kid

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expensive

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asset, he or she will only become friend with one who

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from a worthy family, in

this

way poor kids are always alone. In my perspective, teachers have to do as much as they can

for

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ammiting

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admitting

committing

emitting

this

opinion. Wearing

uniform

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a uniform

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is highly

benefial

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beneficial

for

students

, they can learn equality and maintenance. Many teachers agree that, if

students

wear same clothes like uniform they take whole attention to what

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said, as a consequence,

their

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learn better and get

higher

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score on exams. Many inventors and professors have had from poor families so expensive assets never build a successful human.

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school

is only for learning and

practicing

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. In

conclution

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conclusion

,

school

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is a place that

students

have a chance to

built

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themselves,they have to

studiy

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study

,

parctive

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practice

and learn,

this

is the main aim for each

schools

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.Create

the

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better atmosphere for learning must be taken into consideration.According to what

i

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said above,

i

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am pretty sure that

schools

are only for learning

not

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show off.