You are going for a one-week vacation and your friend agreed to stay at your place while you are away. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter, you should: thank her/him and tell the dates of your holiday explain how he/she enters the house describe what you expect him/her to do.

Dear Ali, I hope

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letter finds you in good spirits. I am writing to express my sincere appreciation for your kindness in agreeing to stay at my home during my vacation. I have planned a trip to Thailand from September 23rd to 30th for seven nights. To enter my home, you will need a password to unlock the door, which is 9113120494. After that, please use the key that I will place under the rose pot in front of the door. I would appreciate it if you could pay the bills using the money I have left on top of the fridge. I

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kindly ask you to water the plants on the balcony every day, especially the roses, as they need frequent watering. Thank you once again for your time and support. I truly appreciate your help and hope that I can return the favour in the future. Please feel free to contact me if you need any

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information. Best regards, Mohammadreza

m.hadavi20

Nov 29, 2025

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Your task parts are there. You thank, give dates, show how to enter, and say what to do.

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All required parts are shown (thanks, dates, entry, duties).

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Tone is warm and gentle.

coherence and cohesion

The flow from thanks to details is clear.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

165 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Appreciate
Grateful
House-sit
Trust
Holiday
Dates
Entering','Instructions
Security
Expectations
Take care
Pet
Watering plants
Collect mail
Maintain cleanliness
Potential issues
Conclude
Confidence
Reciprocate

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