A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Give details of the course you took at the university Explain why you recommend the university Give some advice about how to apply

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Dear John, I hope you find
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letter in the pink of your health. I am really excited to know that you are planning to join York
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for doing your major. I would be really happy to inform you about the pros and cons of the subject that you are thinking to get into. As per my perspective, health science is a great option to go for, because it will land you into the career you aim for, though there will be a lot of competition. I did my major in health science and I would recommend you to go for it.
This
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particular area covers three modules with
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project towards the end of
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. The research would be carried on within the local area and
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would have to be given for publication. York
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is one of the best
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to study
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is
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US
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, as you would graduate from here as an elite student with competitive skills. The application process is quite tough. I would suggest you
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keep a keen eye on the registration process.
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huge
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number of students apply for admissions
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when
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of seats are limited. I have given details of the website which you can check through for getting a clear idea,
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jut
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go
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through it. Get in touch with me, if you need to know
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anything
more. Regards Neethu Babu
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prospective student
  • alma mater
  • curriculum
  • faculty
  • state-of-the-art
  • extramural
  • scholarly pursuits
  • cohort
  • accreditations
  • holistic development
  • pedagogy
  • thesis
  • dissertation
  • prerequisites
  • mentorship
  • application portal
  • tuition fees
  • scholarships
  • financial aid
  • internship opportunities
  • networking events
  • career services
  • personal statement
  • deadline
  • admissions office
  • recommendation letters
  • portfolio
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