In the future, all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Advanced technologies may enable us to commute from one place to another without the need
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whereas some people
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believe that the merits of driverless transportation outweigh the demerits and others may not think so. For me, I personally think that there are so many positive effects gained by the use of
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to travel using driverless vehicles conveniently, they are free to do other
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during the commuting time.
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To illustrate, individuals whom
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are located far away from their workplace can still
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their productivity as
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is no longer a problem.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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