In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is a common practice in Britain that, people after
age
of 60 go to live in Add an article
the age
a
old Change the article
an
age
home so that they can get better care
. Some of these facilities are government funded
, while for others family has to bear the expenses. In my opinion, Add a hyphen
government-funded
government
should take Add an article
the government
responsibilty
Correct your spelling
responsibility
of
the expenses for their elderly person to admit and live in old Change preposition
for
age
homes and this
essay will discuss why.
Firstly
, it is government's
responsibility to look after its old citizens since they are limited by their physical abilities due to old Correct article usage
the government's
age
. Since,
the reason they deserve Remove the comma
apply
this
is because they have paid their taxe
and Correct your spelling
taxes
tax
abid
Correct your spelling
abide
by laws
established by country and helped its GDP by working throughout their life. Add a hyphen
by-laws
For example
, Sweden is ranked most
happy country and Correct article usage
the most
reason
being Add an article
the reason
this
nation is taking care
of its citizen and ensuring their needs are met to the best. So, government
is obliged to Add an article
the government
Correct your spelling
pay back
payback
some amount of collected tax towards Correct your spelling
pay back
well-being
of citizens and Add an article
the well-being
this
could be one of the best way
to do it.
Change to a plural noun
ways
Secondly
, in Britain, not every family can afford costs
of Correct article usage
the costs
age
care
facilities for their loved ones and also
it is hard to manage time to sought after elderly
because of Correct article usage
the elderly
busy
work life Correct article usage
the busy
scchedule
. In Correct your spelling
schedule
average
family, both Correct article usage
an average
husabnad
and wife Correct your spelling
husband
has
to work to bring food to the table and manage other chores. Change the verb form
have
For instance
, average
salary to feed Correct article usage
the average
family
in Britain has risen to 100, 000 pounds per year whereas, average salaries are between 60000 to 70000 pounds. Add an article
a family
the family
Hence
it is Correct your spelling
quite
quit
Correct your spelling
quite
inaffordable
for some families to take up expenses of old Correct your spelling
unaffordable
affordable
in affordable
age
homes.
In conclusion, it is a better idea, if government
pays for age
care
facility instead
of family because it is extremely hard for relatives to bear costs and governments is also
obliged to secure some funds for their elderly citizens.Submitted by patelhardik2199 on
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