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Current infrastructure and proposed development in the town centre of Islip

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The maps depict the current infrastructure and the proposed development in the
town
centre
 of Islip. Overall, the major planned development will be the dual carriageway around the
town
centre
.
Additionally
, residential areas and the shopping
centre
 will be included. The
first
 map illustrates a small
town
 area with fewer facilities. There is a main road that passes through the
town
centre
. There are shops on both sides of the main road. The countryside
situated
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 on the north side. A school
located
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 in the southwest, and the residential area has seen in the southern part, while the park
constructed
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 in the southeast corner. The
second
 map shows the planned developments in the future. The most noticeable addition will be a dual carriageway around the
town
, with new housing areas in the northeast as well as in the southeast.
In addition
 to these developments, there will be a bus station on the northwest side.
Also
, the car park will come in the northeast between the shopping
centre
 and the new residential area. The
town
 park size will be reduced for more residential areas.
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