some people believe that unpaid community services should be a compulsory part of high school programmes. to what extent do you agree or disagree
There are several reasons why I disagree with the idea of forcing students to do voluntary works .
Firstly
, students’ school schedule
are sometimes full, Fix the agreement mistake
schedules
as a result
, students would have no time left for community services. Secondly
, concentrating in volunteer may have a bad impact on students’
performance in other subjects. And Correct your spelling
student's
finally
, some students might be reluctant to do community services as it serves no purpose for their study. In conclusion, there are various reasons why compulsory volunteer works are not suitable to be applied in high school.Submitted by hien89ad on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite