Some people think that because children find subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult, they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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evolved to a certain extent that some

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find it difficult to understand(

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maths or philosophy). Some people believe that it will be better if these

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were made optional rather than

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essay will address both these statements and my opinion on the same. To start with, It is important for all

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to get

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understanding of what a particular

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is about.One advantage of having the

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optional is that the children will not feel

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can focus on the

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that he enjoys learning.

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a student that

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due to no flexibility provided in

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he still has to do

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might affect grades for other

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or

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might not be able to focus well on other

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optional is that it might cause unnecessary stress to some of the children.As all children cannot handle the pressure

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caused by the

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that he/she

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consider a child that likes art but

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of

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he is forced to attend philosophy class. So in

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case it may happen that he/she may start bunking other classes and roam outside of school.

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will lead to some other scenario

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to include a hybrid model

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can get to decide their curriculum.

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will not only escalate

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of

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more towards their

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but

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it will be beneficial for

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to get their global rankings high.