Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras) in many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outwiegh the disadvantages?

In modern

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technology

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become

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a massive thing to use

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it

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, and

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public

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community using it wherever they pace.

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side of

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of all, Technology

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an art in public lives, and it

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us a great glimpse of how the future will be from the day we wake up

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tell

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it ends.

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with

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equipments

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types of equipment

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such

as;

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like Apple, Samsung and

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Hawaii

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own it is intuitive specs especially if they use GPS

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and

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.

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, with these features it gives local individuals

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access to obtain great support to live in ease and to order what they want

for instance

; I used a

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and searched via Amazon Application to order rare product, which I searched about it from where I live, but it was not available,

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will not produce it anymore,

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around ( 10-15) days I collect it from Aramex store.

Therefore

, with what I mentioned above it is essential to understand if we are using

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edge item phones we should take an acknowledge consideration upon it, because it may harm us indirect way

Moreover

, it may affect their lives, by mean it could lead the society to adapt lack of communication skills and unable to socialize among peers and families,

in addition

, it may lead them to severe injuries, due to distraction by using

smartphone

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, while moving like what happened to one of my relatives he was driving on Fifth Ring Road in a destination to Fahaheel area,

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when he checked his from sudden he been distracted by one of the notification,

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he crashed in the middle of

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, yet he stayed alive but lost his vehicle. I believe that

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Technology

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will move

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forward

, and out of boundaries to current and

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generations,

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with these features

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because it

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us

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efficient and beneficial

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security

to society. To sum up,

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will keep on with

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especially when the Authority support it, yet adapt it to understand, learn and implement these features to ensure safety to the public.