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In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.

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In
this
 essay, I will compare two different opinions about the need to control
salaries
 below a certain level for a little group of
people
 with extremely big
salaries
. The
first
 view is that the existence of a little amount of extremely rich
people
 is good and the control of them is definitely bad, while the
second
 view is completely opposite. On the left-hand side, a very small number of really rich
people
, cooperating with the government, can affect the rest in a sociopolitical way by spending some of their own money to make life at a certain place better without taking money from everyone around.
Also
. the control of rich peoples'
salaries
 is a violation of their rights, and the violation of rights is never a good thing. On the right-hand side, the existence of a small group of really rich
people
 makes the difference between them and the rest of the society bigger and bigger.
In addition
, it is really dangerous to allow their
salaries
 to keep being so big
,
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 because the social difference can cross the line of absurd once. My opinion is that the government shouldn't allow
salaries
 above a certain level, but do it very carefully, because in most cases
people
 confirm the thought about huge society difference, and the government can be those
people
.
For example
, the society of the Russian Empire was built in
such
 a way, where rich families were rich for generations, and poor
people
 could never change their situation. Poor hated the rich and rich were treated poorly like they are not men at all.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • incentivize
  • discrepancy
  • inequality
  • social cohesion
  • equitable distribution
  • wealth concentration
  • talent retention
  • global competitiveness
  • social unrest
  • innovate
  • government intervention
  • salary cap
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