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The number of old people is increasing in many countries. Some people think this causes problems, while others think old people play an important role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In Modern times, science has played a crucial role in augmenting life expectancy around the world.
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 and building traditions in future generations. Following I will discuss both perspectives.
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 is sustainable, as they help us revive the traditions, cultures and enlighten us about our ancestors.
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, grandmothers always pass on the secret recipes of the family, indeed keeping a tradition alive.
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 a lot of millennial parents get help from their parents to look after their babies. There is a noteworthy bond created between grandparents and children which aids in their development. The significance of
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 generation is irrefutable. The downside of having
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its strain on
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 resources of a nation.
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, to pay heed to the older people’s needs the government has generated various schemes for financial aid , Which in turn deprives the younger generation
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 government help with education. Extra endeavours have to be taken by the communities to adapt to the entails of old people. Wishlist augmenting to use of more resources. In
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, there are advantages and disadvantages of having
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 . In my perspective, it is obligatory for a society to have older people as they add value and authenticity to our communities. whilst, the government should work on enhancing its financial model in assisting
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 without any consequences on other aids.
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