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Many people believe that cooking is an essential life skill and should be taught to boys and girls in schools. Others disagree and believe it is a waste of school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Many are of opinion that cooking is an essential life skill and should be educated to boys and girls in schools while, others are of thinking that it is waste of valuable school
time
 ,in
this
 , an essay I am going to discuss the pros and cons and I am in favour of the educating than not. Cooking is a complex science and it needs precise knowledge of ingredients and quality and quantity of other substances to mix with to get the best out of cooking in sense of preserving nutrients and enhancing their absorption and
on the other hand
, saving from
food
 poisoning.So it is vital to have some basic education during school
time
 which makes the students life easy in future and enhance chances for a job in
food
 industries and saving money by self-cooking as they do not need to buy the costly restaurant and fast-
food
 meals. Opponents of education advocate that in
this
time
 of hurry and bustle ,people do not have
time
 for preparing
food
 and are going to rely on the fast-
food
 industry and restaurant chains for their
food
 requirements,
therefore
 adding cooking to the syllabus is just a waste of
time
 which can be devoted to other valuable subjects and home cooking will decrease the revenue of convenient
food
 industry and government income from taxes. In ,
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conclusion I will support the above-mentioned education as it is worth the
time
 devoted to these skills in terms of the quality of healthy and nutritious ,
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food
 they can get by learning
this
 science.
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