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With the latest technological advancements, dating is now possible online. Would you recommend online dating for your single friends? What are the advantages and disadvantages of online dating? Site some examples to support your answer.

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Social networks have become a part of our life and fewer
people
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 meet on the street, or in public places now than in the past, and more often, they do it by using the
Internet
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. There are both advantages and disadvantages of
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 phenomenon, but I, in turn, would not recommend
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 sites to
someone
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 I know. Some of the advantages of
internet
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 dating are that it spares time, as well as gives
opportunity
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 to meet many more
people
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 and at
anytime
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. There are no restrictions on the number of acquaintances on the
Internet
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. It is possible to conduct relationships and correspondence with several
people
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 at the same time. The
Internet
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 opens the boundaries and a
person
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 can find
people
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 not only for love relationships
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 but
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 for friendship.
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, I was able to get acquainted with an interesting
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, who
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 became my good friend.
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, it is a convenient way to meet and communicate
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 busy
people
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, who do not have time for personal meetings.
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, dating on the
internet
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 has its negative sides.
First
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,
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 may impersonate, or pretend to be
someone
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 they are not actually. While a
person
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 is chatting on the
Internet
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, he or she does not know what the interlocutor really looks like. There are
people
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 who deliberately hide their appearance and deceive.
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, the
Internet
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 is full of scammers who have bad intentions and want to get rich at
someone
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 else's expense. A good illustration would be the story of my female classmate, who met a
person
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 on a dating site. Afterwards, he turned out to be a fraud who offered her to go to a questionable site using a link that he sent her. Fortunately, she did not do
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 and everything worked out. In conclusion, searching for a partner or a friend on the
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 is gaining popularity and has both pros and cons.
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, I believe that only at a personal meeting is it possible to find out what kind of
person
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someone
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 really is, and
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 I do not consider online dating a good idea.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Wider pool
  • Potential partners
  • Pre-screening
  • Compatible interests
  • Convenience
  • Accessibility
  • Empowerment
  • Deceitful profiles
  • Misrepresent
  • Lack of depth
  • Physical appearance
  • Analysis paralysis
  • Cyber-security
  • Compromised information
  • Dating app
  • Common interests
  • Meaningful connection
  • Identity theft
  • Overwhelming choices
  • Social circles
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