Some people believe that celebrity personal events ia a waste of money. Others feel that these celebrations play an important role in the lives of individual and in society as a whole. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Celebrating events like birthdays and marriages is the tradition culturally going on to generations from the ancient periods with changes in the style of celebration and involvement of individuals.For some individuals it is squandering of hard-earned money while others are of the opinion that they play a vital role for the person as well as society ,I am going to elaborate on both sides in

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I am in favour of enjoying these functions. The small number of community

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think that birthday and marriage parties are a waste of money and no respect to the efforts done to achieve and save that penny and can be saved for future development or for buying much-needed gadgets in the house or for the person in the family who need them ,

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can be used as education funds for students for higher education. Even some can suggest these funds are to be donated to needy and poor people in the community. The group in favour of celebration argues that it provides opportunities for

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to get together and

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,cases it becomes an event of re-union of family

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living abroad ,

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events serve the purpose of apology and forgiving for

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having grudges with each other.These functions let the younger know their social values in what they have inherited from ancestors, so they act as pride moments and opportunities of learning traditional values. In the

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end considering all the above-mentioned pros and cons ,I am strongly in favour of having those celebrations whenever they come and enjoy them to the fullest.