You would like a job working in the summer camp which runs sports and outdoor activities for children and young people. Write a letter to the organisers of the summer camp. In your letter, explain what sort of work you would like to do describe your personality say what relevant experience and skills you have Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam, I writing
this
letter to apply for a job in a summer camp which runs
sports
and outdoor activities for children and younger people. The summer camp requires a lot of planning before a journey and after starting of events and that's why I can help the organiser from starting to the end of camping which may include the work of managing people, organising the different
sports
and scheduling an event on different days. I
havehad
Correct your spelling
have had
a tremendous interest in games since early childhood and that's why I always take part in different
sports
events and
also
keep my body fit and healthy which can help me to perform well in
sports
.
Moreover
, I have been working with different
sports
facilitators for the
last
two years which helped me to gain skills and knowledge of camping and adventures and because of my experiences, I believe
this
job will be perfect for me. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Ankit
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task achievement
Make sure to include a brief introduction that states your name and purpose more clearly.
coherence cohesion
Divide the letter into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a single idea, such as your qualifications, experience, and personality traits.
task achievement
The letter successfully addresses the required points of the task: explaining the type of work, describing personality, and providing relevant experience.
coherence cohesion
The closing of the letter is polite and appropriate.

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