IN SOME AREAS OF THE US, A "CURFEW" IS IMPOSED, IN WHICH TEENAGERS ARE NOT ALLOWED TO BE OUT OF DOORS AFTER A PARTICULAR TIME AT NIGHT UNLESS THEY ARE ACCOMPANIED BY AN ADULT. WHAT IS YOUR OPINION ABOUT THIS?

A ‘curfew’ is imposed in some areas of
US
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. During
this
time
,
teenagers
are not permitted to visit their
friends
or be with anyone
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outdoors
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out doors
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outdoors
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after a certain
time
at
night
unless an adult accompanied them. In my opinion,
although
teenage
children
prefer
the
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freedom
all the
time
, including nights,
parents
put
this
curfew for the safety of their
children
. On the one hand,
teenagers
always prefer to be with their group of
friends
or with their loved ones all the
time
especially during
night
times and because of that, they hate
curfews
. Mostly, they arrange parties or sleepovers, in which they can spend
time
with
friends
and enjoy the
night
. They get very disappointed and frustrated when
parents
imposing
curfews
which
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that
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stopping them to attend these
late
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late-night
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night
meet-ups with
friends
. Because of that,
teenagers
think that the curfew taking away their
freedom
.
On the other hand
,
parents
imposing
curfews
during
night
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the night
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times just to protect their
children
from any danger. Considering the crime rates in
US
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, especially some states in
US
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the US
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, every parent try their best to find ways to protect their
children
. Imposing curfew during
night
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nighttime
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time
is one
such
method to ensure the safety of their
children
. It is concerned by most
parents
that
the
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teenagers
can easily get in trouble if they get
the
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full
freedom
during
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at
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nights
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night
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. So, they imposing
curfews
to restrict
teenagers
out-door
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outdoor
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activities during
night
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the night
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time
on their own
instead
, one of the
parent
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parents
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can accompany them if they have any important reason to visit their
friends
. In conclusion,
teenagers
always prefer their
freedom
than
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their safety, but
parents
imposing
curfews
during nights just to protect their
children
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enforce
  • juvenile
  • repercussions
  • autonomy
  • adolescence
  • paternalistic
  • delinquency
  • municipality
  • ordinance
  • authoritarian
  • peer pressure
  • social dynamics
  • civil liberties
  • community policing
  • preventative measures
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