International travel has many advantages to both travellers and the country that they visited. Do advantages outhweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays,travelling

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abroad is popular in all countries which

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many

benefits

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for both

travelers

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and

the

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society.I believe that the

benefits

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is

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far more its drawbacks.

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essay will present

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and negative aspects of international travel. On one hand,Traveling

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overseas has many

benefits

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for both society and

traveler

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travelers

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.The main advantage is that

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visitors will have a chance to expand their

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.They can think

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outside

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out-side

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the box ,

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moreover

,visitors can

improved

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their knowledge about

different

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a different

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culture

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cultures

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,

style

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styles

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of architect and

cousine

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cuisine

by travelling.

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important to note that

traveling

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is highly beneficial for society.As the number of

travelers

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travellers

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increased,the standard level of living in the country rise.In more detail,

travelers

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travellers

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bring currency and have been

spend

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in

others

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countries,

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,it causes boosting the economy.Many job

oppotunities

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opportunities

were created because of

tourist

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.

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,

tourism

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industry has few drawbacks and put negative effects

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the environment.

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,many historical places were destroyed and

misbehavior

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of tourists

were

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belamed

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for that.Many scientists agree that

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travelling by

airplane

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has some negative effects

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the environment.It is not deniable that

tourist

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tourists

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might change the culture of the specific area which is unacceptable.According to the data of an international bank in the UK,

poor

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the poor

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population has been never

tought

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taught

thought

about visit other countries. To conclude,travelling

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abroad has many positive and negative consequences.According to what I said,the

benefits

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of international travel is far more

its

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than its

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drawbacks.