Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion

In modern days, the evolution of technology changed and it's not surprising that
computers
are a necessary thing for education.
Computers
are easy to use and save a lot of time. But how does it affect students and their education? Can
this
method bring more cons than pros? In ,addition to
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to analyze
situation
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properly, we need to understand how it works on the learning side. Most universities demand
junior
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to have a minicomputer so it would be easier for them to track the lectures and test their abilities. A big amount of information can be detected by
graduate
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.
This
can help
undergraduate
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to find important notes for their project and help with their personal life.
Freshmen
also
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it. They find working with their own computer really cool and trendy, so they rarely complain. But does it really bring no downs? Looking at the other perspective, can
computers
make
freshmen
daily life even harder? It's quite obvious that junior can spend most of their time it their universities and colleges and they always have their desktop computer with them. A laptop can be pretty heavy in some cases, so it can badly affect
freshmen
back, not
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the fact that it
also
can damage the remembering process. It's
also
been scientifically proven
instead
of using paper not, but the laptop can slower the thinking process. In
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does
this
bring
a negative effects
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on
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? It most likely can, but it's necessary to use them. There are some professions that require using them, but some may not.
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also
depends on how
freshmen
themself use them.
Computers
bring us a lot of help in our life, but not every technology is perfect, so it's not shocking to discover its cons. But as long as we can handle it, nothing bad is going to happen.
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