Writing an essay of 250 words to describe a big city.

Located in the North of
Vietnam
,
Hanoi
is one of the most bustling cities that you can ever find. It is by far the most famous attraction worldwide due to its charming, elegant and ancient architecture. Not only does
Vietnam
's capital attract tourists by the scenery, but
also
its delicious cuisines. If you have a chance to visit
Hanoi
, you will be impressed by its old-style architecture, especially in the village between the
city
. The unique appearance of
this
capital is wholeheartedly different from any charming scenery in the world, it is not only a crowded
city
with hurrying passers-by or noisy car horns beeping but
also
the
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rarely
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peacefulness. Walking through a myriad of popular streets in
Hanoi
such
as Phan Dinh Phung, Ly Thuong Kiet, etc. you easily notice the ancient but
also
gorgeous buildings in front of your eyes which may include:
Hanoi
Opera House with the French-colonial design or the Temple of Literature with ancient beauty. All of that combined and created the capital of
Vietnam
-
Hanoi
which bears in minds of visitors
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unforgettable memories.
Moreover
, a few years recently, many more modern and tall buildings have been established which conclude many shopping mall centres and luxury apartments that brings you the sense of a metropolis.
Furthermore
, local snacks in
Hanoi
are
also
one of the attractions which captivate a flood of visitors who come here each year. Be colonized
more
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than 1000 years by the Chinese, the cuisine and
traditional
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of
Vietnam
, especially
Hanoi
somehow be affected,
however
, it can not be denied that
this
capital
city
possess
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a special menu that pole apart from all other countries.
For example
, most foreigners coming to
Hanoi
will at least eat “pho” once as it is the most popular dish which includes soup, beef and rice noodle.
Besides
, there are “banh mi”, which is
also
another favourite food that attracts everyone, the word “banh mi” has
also
been added into the Oxford dictionary as a definition. All of that favour brings people a
Hanoi
feeling which is the sense when you enjoy the food and get deep into
this
city
scenery. For that reason, the trip to
Hanoi
will bear in mind each person who came here and become the best memories. To conclude, I want to emphasize the beauty of
Hanoi
- the capital
city
of
Vietnam
, not only by its architecture but
also
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the
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appetizing food.
This
is one of the must-try
place
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that you should visit in your life.
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