In many countries, international tourism has become an important source of income. However, it also has negative effects. Do the benefits of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays,

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has become one of the most valuable parts of a country's economy. Some people believe that it has more additional positive influences

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society, but

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others tend to believe that there are more consequences of it. I personally believe that it has more upside effects than its negative ones. In

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essay, I will explain the reasons behind the above-mentioned statement.

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with, international

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many advantages for the communities. It mainly

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around its economic and social development benefits.

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of all,

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kind of activity provides

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economy. The opening of holiday places

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usually followed by the rise of

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trading activities.

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, there will be

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for the community around the destination to sell

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related to it or to sell daily needs for tourists with an increasing margin.

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, it will give people more job choices and increase their income.

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, the opening of

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will be followed by the development of surrounding facilities,

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as roads, bridges, and public transportations.

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will bring a benefit to the locals because it

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improves their quality of life.

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, international

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can

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bring a major downside, which

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the destruction of

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natural ecosystems.

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, an increasing activity to build hotels or any facilities related to it, if not regulated, will cause the destruction of the river or land near that

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.

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, it will

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bring many negative effects to the animals or even the society in that areas. In conclusion, based on the reasons I have mentioned above, the advantages of

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international

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still outweigh their disadvantages.

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, there is still a need

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government regulation to make sure that the negative effects are kept to minimal.