Students generally prefer to choose the period they are supposed to study and the period they are free to have fun. They should be allowed to do their time management. Do you agree or disagree?

In today’s world,

time

management skill has been highly requested in school and companies. With

this

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people is free to choose

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path but get the same result at the due date. It is agreed that

students

should be authorized to decide their own period to study and to play, being able to manage their

time

. Analysing the fact that

students

are the future workforce as well as that they need to learn to be independent will explain

this

.

Firstly

, busy is the

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permanent

state of the people in

this

increasing society, so young people need to be prepared.

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learning on how to complete a

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,

for example

, is crucial to have good performance at work.

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is a skill that

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should be

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exposed

to develop in order to become

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successful

professional

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.

Therefore

,

this

makes

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it

clear that

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should be responsible for

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their task

time

.

Secondly

, nowadays it is very common that both

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work out and do not have

time

to

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control

their offspring’s

time

.

However

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if kids have,

for example

, a list of tasks

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need to be completed at the end of the day regardless

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order, they would be getting used to

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their

time

. Independent

students

optimize

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time

.

Thus

,

this

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apparent that letting the tutee assume their decisions is beneficial. To summarize, considering that kids are the future of the nation, being able to indicate their preference independently will form better

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adults

.

Therefore

, it is clear that ban

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of

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their

time

is not supported. After a thorough analysis on

this

subject, it is recommended that

students

are allowed to do their

time

management as soon as possible.