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Modern Shopping centre are more convenient, however, small local super markets still are have many customers. Discuss advantages and disadvantages? Which one is better

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Everyday Modern shopping
centres
 are opening in
suburb
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suburbs
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 and big cities. These shopping
centres
 are convenient
as a result
 small local
markets
 are losing customers. I will explain
this
 below. On the
first
 hand, these modern shopping
centres
 are opened in every suburb. So,
it’s
 easy to get there. They have almost every type of
product
shops
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.
Hence
, one doesn’t have to go to different
shops
 to buy different
products
. It saves petrol and money. If the
product
 is faulty
it’s
 easy to replace and get another.
Moreover
, Customer service and Cleanliness is of
high
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 standard. These shopping
centre
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centres
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 have video surveillance and security,
therefore
,
it’s
 safe to shop.
Moreover
, Modern shopping
centres
 consist of famous brand
shops
.
On the other hand
, Small local
markets
 are smaller. It is often to get overcharged by the staff. Customer service and Cleanliness is of
low
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 standard.
Products
 are of poor quality. Sometimes,
it’s
 hard to find a particular
product
.
Furthermore
,
Products
 are not labelled properly and placed
untidy
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 on the shelves. So,
its
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 takes time to find a particular
product
Although
, Modern shopping
centres
 are crowded with
people
. But, I think it makes
people
 happy when they see so many
people
 shopping. Many advertising
are
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is
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 successful in
the
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modern shopping
centres
.
This
 helps
people
 in knowing about the
product
 and
their
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 uses.
At
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 the end, it is clear that modern shopping
centres
 have many advantages over small local
markets
. That’s the reason small local
markets
 are losing their popularity. .
However
, I believe that only
shops
 selling particular country’s
products
 that are not available
to
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in modern shopping
centres
 are still popular
between
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among
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 those country
people
.
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