Some People Believe That Children Should Study Academic Subjects At School; Others Believe That Practical Subjects Are More Important

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improve your knowledge and ability as well. Few people think that
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students need to learn some academic
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subject
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at
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the secondary
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. On another
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some people assert that they should have to study
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a practical
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subject
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as mechanical, electrical and many more.
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essay I will discuss both views in
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paragraphs.
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, there are many benefits to learning academic
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subjects
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. People believe that academic
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subject
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subjects
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like physic, history upgrade pupils thinking
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and they become more familiar with
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the culture
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. Nowadays, juvenile
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more attract with useless activity rather than focus on career so academic
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helps
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them to become strong and familiar with society.
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, academic
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are base of the
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study
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with the help of these
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we can make our
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in some extraordinary line
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as engineering, doctoring and many more,
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, one research
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that many of the
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schools
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should have to enter some academic
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course to maintain
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of culture On another side, students should have to learn practical
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as cooking, mechanical at
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the primary
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because it helps them to get better
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and job opportunities. These
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types
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of
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are more beneficial to grow undergraduate’s career. Most of the
pupil
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pupils
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select practical
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courses
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over the theory
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.
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, they are able to make their own business.
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, most of the students got rejection during the interview as they don’t have enough practical knowledge.
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, I conclude that it is necessary to learn academic
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courses
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such
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as mathematics, physics because these are base of our study but
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without practical intelligence they can’t get better
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. so I believe that pupils should have to upgrade their thinking
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on practical site so they can make their
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bright and independent.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • well-rounded education
  • discover their interests and strengths
  • basic understanding
  • interconnected world
  • higher motivation
  • deeper knowledge
  • mental health
  • reducing unnecessary stress
  • boredom
  • balanced approach
  • successful specialization
  • well-informed perspective
  • solid general education
  • freedom to delve deeper
  • specialized future career path
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