Some People Believe That Children Should Study Academic Subjects At School; Others Believe That Practical Subjects Are More Important
Learning new things at
school
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the school
level
improve your knowledge and ability as well. Few people think that,
students need to learn some academic Remove the comma
apply
level
subject
at secondary
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the secondary
level
. On another site
some people assert that they should have to study Add a comma
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practical
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a practical
level
subject
such
as mechanical, electrical and many more. This
essay I will discuss both views in Change preposition
In this
following
paragraphs.
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the following
Firstly
, there are many benefits to learning academic level
subjects
. People believe that academic subject
like physic, history upgrade pupils thinking Fix the agreement mistake
subjects
level
and they become more familiar with culture
. Nowadays, juvenile Add an article
the culture
are
more attract with useless activity rather than focus on career so academic Change the verb form
is
subjects
helps
them to become strong and familiar with society. Change the verb form
help
Secondly
, academic subjects
are base of the upper
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upper-level
level
study also
with the help of these subjects
we can make our future
in some extraordinary line such
as engineering, doctoring and many more, For example
, one research show
that many of the Change the verb form
shows
school
should have to enter some academic Fix the agreement mistake
schools
level
course to maintain dignity
of culture
On another side, students should have to learn practical Add an article
the dignity
subjects
such
as cooking, mechanical at primary
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the primary
level
because it helps them to get better future
and job opportunities. These type
of Fix the agreement mistake
types
subjects
are more beneficial to grow undergraduate’s career. Most of the pupil
select practical Fix the agreement mistake
pupils
course
over the theory Fix the agreement mistake
courses
subject
. As a result
, they are able to make their own business. For instance
, most of the students got rejection during the interview as they don’t have enough practical knowledge.
Finally
, I conclude that it is necessary to learn academic course
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courses
such
as mathematics, physics because these are base of our study but also
without practical intelligence they can’t get better future
. so I believe that pupils should have to upgrade their thinking level
on practical site so they can make their future
bright and independent.Submitted by mulchand.sen16 on
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