Some People Believe That Children Should Study Academic Subjects At School; Others Believe That Practical Subjects Are More Important

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school

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level

improve your knowledge and ability as well. Few people think that

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students need to learn some academic

level

subject

at

secondary

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level

. On another

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some people assert that they should have to study

practical

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a practical

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level

subject

such

as mechanical, electrical and many more.

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essay I will discuss both views in

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paragraphs.

Firstly

, there are many benefits to learning academic

level

subjects

. People believe that academic

subject

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subjects

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like physic, history upgrade pupils thinking

level

and they become more familiar with

culture

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the culture

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. Nowadays, juvenile

are

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more attract with useless activity rather than focus on career so academic

subjects

helps

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them to become strong and familiar with society.

Secondly

, academic

subjects

are base of the

upper

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upper-level

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level

study

also

with the help of these

subjects

we can make our

future

in some extraordinary line

such

as engineering, doctoring and many more,

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, one research

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that many of the

school

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schools

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should have to enter some academic

level

course to maintain

dignity

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the dignity

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of culture On another side, students should have to learn practical

subjects

such

as cooking, mechanical at

primary

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the primary

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level

because it helps them to get better

future

and job opportunities. These

type

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types

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of

subjects

are more beneficial to grow undergraduate’s career. Most of the

pupil

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pupils

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select practical

course

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courses

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over the theory

subject

.

As a result

, they are able to make their own business.

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, most of the students got rejection during the interview as they don’t have enough practical knowledge.

Finally

, I conclude that it is necessary to learn academic

course

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courses

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such

as mathematics, physics because these are base of our study but

also

without practical intelligence they can’t get better

future

. so I believe that pupils should have to upgrade their thinking

level

on practical site so they can make their

future

bright and independent.