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Some people think that it is better to other countries for greater work and life opportunities. Others argue that it is best to stay in their home country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Working is one of the most crucial parts of
people
's lives. Some
people
 are firm believers in working abroad for greater
opportunities
. Others,
however
, have shown devotion to staying in their
country
.
This
 essay will discuss both points of view and explain my opinion. The
first
 and most obvious reason for working overseas was
work
opportunities
 leads to having better pay increments and perks.
For example
, a father who is the sole breadwinner decided to
work
 abroad to get a higher income, he will have enough money to subsidising his family. Leading to their family might have a better quality of
life
.
In addition
, living in a developed
country
 has a great
life
 because of taking care of their employee by giving better welfare and insurance to improve their
life
.
On the other hand
, staying in their
country
 can help the
country
 development. The rationale behind
this
 is nowadays many countries face the brain drain that an educated
people
 tend to move out
.
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 So if citizens help their
country
 by staying, the
country
 will have enough manpower and productive
people
 for developing the
country
.
Moreover
, due to working in the home
country
, the family bond is increased by spending time with their family. As the result, families can help their children to overcome the problems so the criminal rate might decrease
then
 the
country
 will be a better place. In conclusion, there are substantial benefits of working overseas thanks to more
work
opportunities
. From my perspective, if citizens stay in the
country
 leading to the
country
 development, the
country
 will have greater
work
 and
life
opportunities
 similar to developed countries.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multinational companies
  • standard of living
  • personal growth
  • broader perspective
  • support system
  • social isolation
  • discrimination
  • healthcare
  • education
  • social services
  • enriching
  • fulfilling
  • impactful
  • career opportunities
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