Some believe in enrolling their children into the best schools so that they learn to socialize while others believe that homeschooling is a better option. Discuss both views and where do you stand on this topic?

Teaching children

in

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Home

instead

of enrolling them in

best

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schools are believed to be a better choice by some groups because by

this

kid

forms an adhesive bond with the family but exposure to

outer

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the outer

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world is limited.

On the contrary

, some

believe

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belief

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in school

tutions

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tuitions

as it

leeds

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leads

to better social skills but

daily

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the daily

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schedule of the

kid

becomes very hectic.

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and foremost,

grasping

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power of kids

are

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at its peak at

this

age.

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exposue

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exposure

to different things and environments make them inquisitive. Kids going to

best

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the best

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of academies meet individuals from different races,

religion

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religions

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and

culture

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cultures

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.

Hence

,

social

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the social

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skills of a

kid

will improve by

intracting

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interacting

with them. Counter to

this

, kids have a very hectic schedule which does not allow them to explore their other curiosities.

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,

child

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a child

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with

interest

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an interest

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in

painting

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the painting

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might not get sufficient time towards it.

Socondly

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Secondly

,

Home schooling

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Homeschooling

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leads to a better

relation

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relationship

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with the family members by spending most of their time at

home

.

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, they get all the values

which

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the family wants to inculcate in them.

This

practice can

also

limit a young's brain to

outer

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the outer

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world and

hence

child

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a child

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can suffer from

lack

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a lack

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of social skills and find it difficult to mingle with other people.

For example

, a child who is always

home

taught goes out for higher studies, the individual might find it difficult to adapt

in

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the new environment. In conclusion,

home schooling

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homeschooling

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leads to a better relationship with the family but

kid

lacks in social areas. whereas, best schools provide young people

wih

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with

best of exposure and opportunities and

hence

,

i

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stand with teachings given at schools rather than at

home

.