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Many Countries today are experiencing high levels of migration from rural areas to cities. What are the causes of this trend, and what effects does it have on the existing city dwellers?

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Migration from
countryside
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the countryside
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 to urban
areas
 has been a popular phenomenon in many nations of the world for many years. There are some reasons and impacts on
city’s
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the city’s
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 residents which will be discussed in
this
 essay.
To begin
 with, the main cause of migration is the availability of more job opportunities in the
cities
. Due to the fact that in rural
areas
, jobs are mainly related to
agriculture
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the agriculture
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 sector, which is being mechanized,
less
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fewer
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 human resources are needed.
Next
, many young people are not into
field work
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. They like to challenge themselves with more advance and high technology
career
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careers
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. Many high tech companies are located in urban
areas
.
Furthermore
, the payment in many industrial and financing
areas
 are much higher than that from agriculture work.
For instance
, according to recent research, the salary of
banking
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the banking
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 sector on average is three times higher than that of
agricultural
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the agricultural
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 sector.
Last
 but not least, the young generation
want
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 to make
big
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a big
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change
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to
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in
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 their life. They want to have a better future prospect for
their
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next
 generation.
Cities
 offer a lot of opportunities and have better infrastructure, health care and education facilities. There are two consequences stemmed from
this
 phenomenon.
Firstly
, more people coming to the
cities
 will place more pressure on the current infrastructure. Overcrowding and traffic congestion
frequent
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 from day
to day
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today
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.
This
 can easily
seen
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 in many
cities
in
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not only in developing countries
such
 as Thailand, Vietnam but
also
 in more developed countries like Japan.
Secondly
, more people will result in more competition for the same job. On top of that, the flux of migrants will
also
 cause housing prices
accelerated
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.
That is
 an inevitable consequence when the demand is becoming greater than the demand. To conclude, migration is an inevitable tendency that required the
closed
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 collaboration of government, companies and individuals. Living
condition
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conditions
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 for rural
areas
 should be paid more attention
and
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 improved.
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