Many Countries today are experiencing high levels of migration from rural areas to cities. What are the causes of this trend, and what effects does it have on the existing city dwellers?
Migration from
countryside
to urban Add an article
the countryside
areas
has been a popular phenomenon in many nations of the world for many years. There are some reasons and impacts on city’s
residents which will be discussed in Correct article usage
the city’s
this
essay.
To begin
with, the main cause of migration is the availability of more job opportunities in the cities
. Due to the fact that in rural areas
, jobs are mainly related to agriculture
sector, which is being mechanized, Add an article
the agriculture
less
human resources are needed.
Correct quantifier usage
fewer
Next
, many young people are not into field work
. They like to challenge themselves with more advance and high technology Correct your spelling
fieldwork
career
. Many high tech companies are located in urban Fix the agreement mistake
careers
areas
.
Furthermore
, the payment in many industrial and financing areas
are much higher than that from agriculture work. For instance
, according to recent research, the salary of banking
sector on average is three times higher than that of Add an article
the banking
agricultural
sector.
Add an article
the agricultural
Last
but not least, the young generation want
to make Change the verb form
wants
big
Add an article
a big
change
Fix the agreement mistake
changes
to
their life. They want to have a better future prospect for Change preposition
in
their
Change the word
the
next
generation. Cities
offer a lot of opportunities and have better infrastructure, health care and education facilities.
There are two consequences stemmed from this
phenomenon. Firstly
, more people coming to the cities
will place more pressure on the current infrastructure. Overcrowding and traffic congestion frequent
from day Add a missing verb
are frequent
to day
. Correct your spelling
today
This
can easily seen
in many Change the verb form
be seen
cities
in
not only in developing countries Change preposition
apply
such
as Thailand, Vietnam but also
in more developed countries like Japan. Secondly
, more people will result in more competition for the same job.
On top of that, the flux of migrants will also
cause housing prices accelerated
. Change the verb form
to accelerate
That is
an inevitable consequence when the demand is becoming greater than the demand.
To conclude, migration is an inevitable tendency that required the closed
collaboration of government, companies and individuals. Living Replace the word
close
condition
for rural Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
areas
should be paid more attention and
improved.Change preposition
to and
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