Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.

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Youth crime is the most serious problem

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be solved in our

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. Teenage crimes are going to more aggressive and violent. One of the

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childhood and adolescence are unique from other stages in that people in those stages are emotionally vulnerable and easily swayed by the circumstances around them

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so that they are more likely to get involved in criminal activities.

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family is being the standard, the time spent their peers is increasing.

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cannot decide rightly due to the fact that nobody

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them how to behave properly.

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to say, adult's supervision and education are needed for

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to behave correctly.

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as parents or elder siblings should spend many hours

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correct values, beliefs and

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will be an opportunity to learn and behave correctly in

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, teachers at school must give

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required actions to their students. In

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will cognitive problems and behave correctly in

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. Another potential solution to juvenile delinquency is to give harsh punishment to offenders.

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can work quickly because it is the most direct way to teach the child to repent their mistakes. Strong punishment can

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give an indirect warning message to other teenagers who may

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

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productive activities
quality education
social media
peer pressure
economic disparity
disadvantaged backgrounds
legitimate means
inclusive education
mentorship
community policing
youth engagement
early intervention
constructive pathways
social services
at-risk families
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Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourist and not locals. What is the cause? and give solutions.

More and more people claim that modern work patterns are a source of stress. what do you think are the causes of this? can you suggest some possible solutions?

some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. why is this the case? do you think this is a positive or a negative developent?

People can live and work anywhere they want to choose, because of improved communication technology and transport. Do the advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages?

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?