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Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause?

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In any
product
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's development lifecycle, success and failure always
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 on the extent of its reach throughout the production. Huge organisations tend to spend copious
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 of money on promotions and marketing to attract
people
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 towards buying
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. There are a few problems to be considered and potential solutions to
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 approach are discussed in the following paragraphs. In my opinion, spending enormous
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 of
company's
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fund
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 to promote a
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 is fine
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 a certain extent. There are only a few instances where
people
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 really get really influenced by the advertisements and go forward to invest and buy
it
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. In most cases, the unwanted
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 of promotions
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 becoming an annoyance to
people
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 who are constantly forced to acknowledge the
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. A realistic example of
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 the mobile phone companies that tend to celebrate their
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 before every potential launch.
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, all of
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 expenditure on marketing strategies which almost in most cases end up in vain
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 can be avoided by
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approaching
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 in a dynamic sense. An effective way to promote a
product
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 would be making use of the relatability factor of each consumer. Based on the data recorded of the customer's previous selective preferences, customised advertisements can be fabricated. Using
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 approach
people
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 who are looking for a certain
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 will be able to look for more products of the same configuration rather than spending time on others that doesn't have any influence. A successful example of
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 is Amazon's E-commerce website,
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 studies a person's preferences
overtime
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over time
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 of a particular
product
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 and provides curated advertisements of products with multiple options. In conclusion, marketing and promotions had a strong influence on
people
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 in a time where technology was lacking. Now with increasing advances in technology and large
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 of data being collected, smart marketing can be economically beneficial and more successful.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • over-reliance
  • disrupts
  • entrepreneurship
  • economic diversity
  • monopolistic
  • financial power
  • homogenization
  • awareness campaigns
  • tax incentives
  • sustainability
  • artisan
  • eco-friendly
  • dominate
  • innovation
  • stifle
  • richness
  • cultures
  • traditions
  • highlighting
  • distinguish
  • superior
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