Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree of disagree with this opinion?

It is true that
music
is an essential means of strengthening the bond between humans from various customs, backgrounds and generations. While I accept that
this
appears logical, I
also
believe that
this
way
may have some drawbacks. On the one hand, there is no doubt
music
is a special language to bring people together.
For example
, Hoang Thuy Linh is a singer
who
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renowned for imparting Vietnamese culture in her songs.
Consequently
, foreigners who are interested in Vietnamese customs can have an insight
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it.
Furthermore
, instrumental
music
, which is a kind of harmonies,
also
bonds people as many tunes are beyond the reach of words and in no
way
can
language
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barrier appear.
On the other hand
, I
also
believe that
this
statement is not completely true because of some undeniable reasons.
Firstly
, it is clear that not only do harmonies make the song great but the lyrics
also
help it be more meaningful, so
cutural
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cultural
differences especially
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can cause many misunderstandings as you do not really empathize with the feelings or meanings of the song.
Secondly
, the generation gap is not solved by
music
as they have different tastes in
music
,so it is too difficult to share their feelings or interests with others.
For instance
, almost all teenagers hate the country and classical
music
which are fond of by the
olders
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holders
elders
.
In addition
,
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music
imparts its senses through listening, so how can
music
bring the deaf between different cultures and ages together? For
this
reason, it is a significant disadvantage for the deaf and
this
statement. To conclude, there are some reasons to believe that
music
, which makes
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man whole, is an excellent
way
to connect people with others, but my own view is that
this
way
does not actually make humans closer.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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