some people believe that it is better to spend more money to eliminate the cause of crime, while others think that the government should spend more on punishment. Discuss both views and give your opinion

These days, It is hard to reject that number of

crimes

have gradually increased every year around the world. In attempts to decrease

crimes

, someones allege that the

government

should advocate more budgets in order to prevent the prospect of

crimes

, whereas others argue that it can be mitigated by imposing the rules and regulations with strict

punishment

. In

this

essay, I will deliberate both viewpoints, which I presumably think that both ways are promising measures to reduce the crime rates. On the one hand,

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vast financial support invested by the

government

can prevent the tendency of

offeces

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offices

officers

because policemen have modern

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and effective tools to fight against bad

people

.

For example

, they can easier catch

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thieves

thiefs

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and criminals by installing more CCTV cameras at every corner of

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and hiring more police officers. For

this

reason, the municipality will get rid of the

crimes

soon as most

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offenders

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are arrested by the police.

On the other hand

, imposing

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strong

punishment

for the

people

, who commit a crime, is

also

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efficient way to significantly reduce the number of

crimes

. As a stricter penalty,

people

are discouraged to do illicit

acitivities

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activities

.

For Instance

, according to the

headquater

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headquarters

headquarter

of the police

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report, the number of

muderers

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murderers

has dramatically declined by 50

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percents

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after the

government

increased

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severity of the

punishment

from being detained in

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jail for 30 years to being executed.

Therefore

, bad

people

dare not to commit illegal activities, and

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our society will be safe from the offenders. In conclusion,

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whether

the

government

supports more financial investment on increasing CCTV and policemen, or consolidates the severity of the

punishment

,

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both measures can

succesfully

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successfully

eliminate the criminal rates.