If you sell a product and people buy it, then advertising it is not necessary and considered as a kind of entertainment. Do you agree or disagree?

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I'm afraid I have to disagree with
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statement. Personally, I believe we are living in a world where
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have access to everything with media,
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even though manufacturer's products might completely get sold out, it doesn't necessarily mean they would have the same share of the
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in the future. In order to prevent
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possibility, advertisements are usually recommended for two main reasons, Self-growth and Competence. Self-growth is crucial for all businesses to reach new individuals in order for an increase in sales. As we are living in populated and dense cities these days, we can almost assume an unlimited demand in the
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not only from the local
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but
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the international ones.
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, if we sell our products completely it wouldn't mean that we are fulfilling
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's needs. So it could be worth trying to use advertisements to attain new
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for the purpose of achieving higher profit.
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, competence is of the utmost important factor for a company to sustain itself in the
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. Since in recent years the technology have advanced greatly,
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began to meet their needs via the Internet.
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, they are immersed in a huge amount of ads each day that are designed in a tempting way and it would be only a matter of time for
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to try them.
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would mean that each day new potential competitors will join the
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and would demand a share of it in return which only means a reduction in ones'
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that is
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followed by an unneglectable profit. So it would be wise to invest a lesser amount of time and money in order to stay competitive. To summarize in my opinion we are ought to consider an advertisement as a beneficial and necessary task for most companies as it would help them to not only keep their current
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but
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favour them in getting a higher proportion of the
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by reaching new potential
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inform
  • educate
  • brand awareness
  • capture attention
  • competitive market
  • influence consumer behavior
  • purchasing decisions
  • positive association
  • enhance appeal
  • product differentiation
  • innovation
  • customers' awareness
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