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Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that it is good for the economy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion.

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There is no doubt that
tourism
 is important for the economy of any
country
. Some folks believe that because
tourism
 affecting their lives while some say that it,s good for the growth of any nation. I,
however
 personally beside with the latter view and I am going to discuss the pros and cons of
this
 in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
 with, some
people
 think that
tourism
 has a negative effect on their everyday lives and they have their own personal views on it.
Firstly
 they think that the
people
 coming from different countries may take some diseases with them especially virus diseases. I still remember back in 2020 when
people
 blamed Chinese
people
 for bringing COVID-19 into their
country
 and it greatly affected the
tourism
 of that
country
. On the flip side, masses who think that
tourism
 has a good impact on their
country
 give their point as.
First
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 it affects the growth of that nation, more
tourism
 means more profit to the
country
 and local
people
 who have small businesses especially run by tourists.
For instance
, according to the survey of
Tourism
 gallary, 43 per cent of small businesses getting benefit from tourists and they are still in because of them. According to my, it's good for the growth of any
country
. It shows that the
people
 in that
country
 may have something special that's attractive to tourists, for ,example their culture, food or even hospitality. So in the
last
, I think it's good for the prosperity of that nation. Here we can clearly see that the pros outweigh the cons.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • negative impact
  • local inhabitants
  • economy
  • boosts
  • cultural exchange
  • preservation
  • restoration
  • environmental degradation
  • overcrowding
  • strain
  • infrastructure
  • cultural dilution
  • commercialized
  • economic dependence
  • sustainable tourism
  • mitigate
  • adverse effects
  • regulation
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