Nowadays, there is a growing trend of private car ownership. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages or environmental problems associated with this?

More and more people are having

the

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own

cars

are dramatically increased for the

last

two decades. It is more comfortable and convenient for owners

as a result

, our surroundings are affected enormously

such

as air pollution.

However

, I think

benefits

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of

this

trend for individuals come over

it's

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drawbacks. Undeniably,

cars

are given more

deterimental

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detrimental

effects from car's smoke

as a result

, air pollution should increase. We can

seen

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that

,

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our earth planet already has

affected

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since

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industrial

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revoultion

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revolution

as well as technological innovation.

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, most developed nations folks are used to their's own

vechile

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vehicle

which is

car

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,

thus

, those countries people

suffers

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more lung cancer than using more public transport

vechiles

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vehicles

who is living

under developed

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nation.

In addition

,

an increasing numbers

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of

an

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own

vechiles

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vehicles

vehicle

,

thus

, may be harmful to our natural

habital

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habitat

habitual

an

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deven

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even

our existence,

this

may be

harm

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to our flora,

funa

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fauna

fun

and all kind of creatures. From the other point of view,

cars

is

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the most comfortable and more convenient travel for everyone,

therefore

, more and more population have ownership of

this

type of

vechiles

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vehicles

.

This

gives

shoposticate

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sophisticate

journey than public transport.

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, a recent survey report said that

,

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the world population more than 60% of folks are having ownership of private

vechiles

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vehicles

such

as

cars

.

In addition

,

this

can stop wherever we want while driving, it's not possible for common bus and train. A lot of car companies have introduced different

price

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for

middle class

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folks

also

will be bought

such

as minimum price.

Hence

,

this

part of

transfort

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transport

is given more speed,

thus

, we can reach anywhere in on time without any delay. To conclude, certainly, private

cars

are very

helful

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helpful

to all in the fast world, even though,

this

can affect our environment through

smoke

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the smoke

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. I think all individuals should focus on our environment, they will be used the public transport

such

as

bus

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, train. I

recommented

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recommended

recommend

the population should be used

bicycle

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bicycles

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when they go

to

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short

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distance

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.