Nowadays, there is a growing trend of private car ownership. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages or environmental problems associated with this?
More and more people are having
the
own Change the word
their
cars
are dramatically increased for the last
two decades. It is more comfortable and convenient for owners as a result
, our surroundings are affected enormously such
as air pollution. However
, I think benefits
of Correct article usage
the benefits
this
trend for individuals come over it's
drawbacks.
Undeniably, Replace the word
its
cars
are given more deterimental
effects from car's smoke Correct your spelling
detrimental
as a result
, air pollution should increase. We can seen
thatChange the verb form
see
,
our earth planet already has Remove the comma
apply
affected
Add a missing verb
been affected
since
Change preposition
by
industrial
Correct article usage
the industrial
revoultion
as well as technological innovation. Correct your spelling
revolution
For example
, most developed nations folks are used to their's own vechile
which is Correct your spelling
vehicle
car
, Add an article
a car
the car
thus
, those countries people suffers
more lung cancer than using more public transport Change the verb form
suffer
vechiles
who is living Correct your spelling
vehicles
under developed
nation. Correct your spelling
underdeveloped
In addition
, an increasing numbers
of Correct the article-noun agreement
an increasing number
increasing numbers
an
own Change the word
our
vechiles
, Correct your spelling
vehicles
vehicle
thus
, may be harmful to our natural habital
Correct your spelling
habitat
habitual
an
Change the article
a
deven
our existence, Correct your spelling
even
this
may be harm
to our flora, Replace the word
harmful
funa
and all kind of creatures.
From the other point of view, Correct your spelling
fauna
fun
cars
is
the most comfortable and more convenient travel for everyone, Change the verb form
are
therefore
, more and more population have ownership of this
type of vechiles
. Correct your spelling
vehicles
This
gives shoposticate
journey than public transport. Correct your spelling
sophisticate
For instance
, a recent survey report said that,
the world population more than 60% of folks are having ownership of private Remove the comma
apply
vechiles
Correct your spelling
vehicles
such
as cars
. In addition
, this
can stop wherever we want while driving, it's not possible for common bus and train. A lot of car companies have introduced different price
for Fix the agreement mistake
prices
middle class
folks Add a hyphen
middle-class
also
will be bought such
as minimum price. Hence
, this
part of transfort
is given more speed, Correct your spelling
transport
thus
, we can reach anywhere in on time without any delay.
To conclude, certainly, private cars
are very helful
to all in the fast world, even though, Correct your spelling
helpful
this
can affect our environment through smoke
. I think all individuals should focus on our environment, they will be used the public transport Add an article
the smoke
such
as bus
, train. I Fix the agreement mistake
buses
recommented
the population should be used Correct your spelling
recommended
recommend
bicycle
when they go Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
to
Change preposition
apply
short
Add an article
a short
distance
.Fix the agreement mistake
distances
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