The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given diagram provides information about how the original blueprint of the existing ground floor was depicted and some modifications were offered in the new design.
Overall
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, there are some changes in the spaces, arrangement of furniture and
stairs
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.
However
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, the main rooms were kept
their
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in their
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first place. Regarding the arrangement of fittings, there will be
kitchen
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furniture added in the
kitchen
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in the west direction. There are two internal doors on the right side of the
kitchen
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near the south entrance door and an internal wall on the top that detaches the
kitchen
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and the other room.
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, the
stairs
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in the hall will be altered to spiral
stairs
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which are bigger than the previous ones. The storage under the
stairs
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will be removed to free up some space needed for the spiral
stairs
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. The internal wall and the internal door separating the hall and the living room on the right side will be removed.
Therefore
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, there is no place for the hall, yet it and the living room will become one.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words stairs, kitchen with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ground floor plan
  • existing layout
  • proposed plan
  • building work
  • key features
  • expansion
  • alterations
  • space utilization
  • functionality
  • aesthetic appeal
  • natural light
  • inhabitants
  • quality of life
  • enhanced flow
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