The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram provides information about how the original blueprint of the existing ground floor was depicted and some modifications were offered in the new design.
Overall
, there are some changes in the spaces, arrangement of furniture and Linking Words
stairs
. Use synonyms
However
, the main rooms were kept Linking Words
their
first place.
Regarding the arrangement of fittings, there will be Change preposition
in their
kitchen
furniture added in the Use synonyms
kitchen
in the west direction. There are two internal doors on the right side of the Use synonyms
kitchen
near the south entrance door and an internal wall on the top that detaches the Use synonyms
kitchen
and the other room.
Use synonyms
Besides
, the Linking Words
stairs
in the hall will be altered to spiral Use synonyms
stairs
which are bigger than the previous ones. The storage under the Use synonyms
stairs
will be removed to free up some space needed for the spiral Use synonyms
stairs
. The internal wall and the internal door separating the hall and the living room on the right side will be removed. Use synonyms
Therefore
, there is no place for the hall, yet it and the living room will become one.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words stairs, kitchen with synonyms.
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