The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words..
The given diagram provides information about how the original blueprint of the existing ground floor was depicted and some modifications were offered in the new design.
Overall
, there are some changes in the spaces, arrangement of furniture and stairs
. However
, the main rooms were kept their
first place.
Regarding the arrangement of fittings, there will be Change preposition
in their
kitchen
furniture added in the kitchen
in the west direction. There are two internal doors on the right side of the kitchen
near the south entrance door and an internal wall on the top that detaches the kitchen
and the other room.
Besides
, the stairs
in the hall will be altered to spiral stairs
which are bigger than the previous ones. The storage under the stairs
will be removed to free up some space needed for the spiral stairs
. The internal wall and the internal door separating the hall and the living room on the right side will be removed. Therefore
, there is no place for the hall, yet it and the living room will become one.Submitted by hnphu79 on
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