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Dear sir or madam, I am writing
this
letter to file a complaint about the
internet
service you have been providing to my area. I have been using your
internet
for the
last
6 years and it was running fine until
last
week. I check with few neighbours too and found that they are facing the same issues. There are two main problems I am facing, frequently connection drops and low
internet
bandwidth speed. Nowadays while I am using the
internet
and working on something
internet
disconnected notification often appears on screens
first
I thought that there might be an issue with my computer but nearby people
also
reported the same.
Although
sometimes I do not see any disconnected messages, the
internet
is running really slow. As you know due to Covid-19, the Majority of people are working from home and students are taking classes online. Due to the
internet
,issues they are facing problems like, disturbance in the students lives session
this
lead to miss a few important lectures.
Also
, the employees working from home doing their work and meetings bad
internet
causing poor performance and waste time of other members who attended the meeting. I already phone the customer support team they were arrogant, the one and the only advice they gave is restarting the computer and router
although
I did it many times, no result. I think the company should have to maintain hardware and cables
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, for example,
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for example
the cable connection in my area is not changed from
last
6 years. Hope urgent prompt reply on
this
, Yours faithfully, Pratik Panchal
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