When choosing a job, salary is the most consideration. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many believe that

income

is a prominent concern when selecting career prospects. Personally, I somewhat agree

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the statement because by having good wages, people have the power to cover not only their basic necessities but

also

providing better security for retirement.

Although

this

view may be reasonable, I am not completely in favour

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the aforementioned opinion as I believe the psychological aspect of a human has to be taken as

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as the monetary value.

First

of all, it is an undeniable fact that earning above the average leads to

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capability

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to gain various goods and services.

This

means by having more

money

, an individual can afford prime essentials,

such

as food and accommodation, and even secondary needs like entertainment and leisure activities.

Secondly

, when a person earns more than he spends, the remaining

money

can

then

be allocated as savings towards retirement.

For instance

, in Australia, on average the population makes about $80,000 per year and has a predicted sum of at least $400,000 on retirement.

Nevertheless

, mental health is equally important as annual

income

when we are deciding our line of work. Many workers ignore the sustainability or the challenges of a job when they start, eventually leading to stress and depression. Eventually, these types of mental

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led to suicide attempts, which is a dead-end regardless of how much

money

a person can have. As an illustration, Switzerland, which citizens have the highest paying

income

annually,

also

ironically has the highest suicide rate in the world.

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have yet to decipher that happiness is crucial, despite the tempting

renumeration

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remuneration

of their chosen occupation. I believe one has to be happy in order to comfortably commit to a certain profession for years. In conclusion, there will always be divided opinions

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income

is the priority contemplation for job-seekers or not. Based on the reasons explained in

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the point that

money

is a massive buying power to sustain life that could even provide a safety net for pension.

However

, I

also

believe that sanity is an equally crucial condition to bear in mind.