The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams illustrate the current
plan
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for the ground
floor
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of a house and another
one
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which contains
expecting
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expected
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changes for some building
structure
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structures
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. Take an
overall
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look, both plans have a
kitchen
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on the left and a living room on the other side and there are stairs for the two counterparts.
In particular
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, relating to infrastructure, the
kitchen
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in the existing
floor
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plan
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is more basic whilst there is
kitchen
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furniture in the proposed
one
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.
Moreover
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, the stairs in the
second
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diagram are more complicated
which
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and
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create a curve from the ground to reach the upper
floor
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; meanwhile, the initial stairs are only a line from the first to the
second
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floor
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, which locate beside the hall and include
a
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apply
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storage under.
Turn
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to the core of the house, the internal doors are distinctive. Particularly, the counterparts are behind the hall in the first
plan
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,
one
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leads to the
kitchen
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and
one
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to the living room;
while
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the doors are
next
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to the entrance door and both lead to the
kitchen
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. In the first
plan
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, there are two internal walls whilst there is just
one
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in the other.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "second".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plan, floor, one, kitchen with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ground floor plan
  • existing layout
  • proposed plan
  • building work
  • key features
  • expansion
  • alterations
  • space utilization
  • functionality
  • aesthetic appeal
  • natural light
  • inhabitants
  • quality of life
  • enhanced flow
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