The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate the current
plan
for the ground Use synonyms
floor
of a house and another Use synonyms
one
which contains Use synonyms
expecting
changes for some building Wrong verb form
expected
structure
.
Take an Fix the agreement mistake
structures
overall
look, both plans have a Linking Words
kitchen
on the left and a living room on the other side and there are stairs for the two counterparts.
Use synonyms
In particular
, relating to infrastructure, the Linking Words
kitchen
in the existing Use synonyms
floor
Use synonyms
plan
is more basic whilst there is Use synonyms
kitchen
furniture in the proposed Use synonyms
one
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the stairs in the Linking Words
second
diagram are more complicated Linking Words
which
create a curve from the ground to reach the upper Correct word choice
and
floor
; meanwhile, the initial stairs are only a line from the first to the Use synonyms
second
Linking Words
floor
, which locate beside the hall and include Use synonyms
a
storage under.
Remove the article
apply
Turn
to the core of the house, the internal doors are distinctive. Particularly, the counterparts are behind the hall in the first Wrong verb form
Turning
plan
, Use synonyms
one
leads to the Use synonyms
kitchen
and Use synonyms
one
to the living room; Use synonyms
while
the doors are Linking Words
next
to the entrance door and both lead to the Linking Words
kitchen
. In the first Use synonyms
plan
, there are two internal walls whilst there is just Use synonyms
one
in the other.Use synonyms
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "second".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plan, floor, one, kitchen with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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