These days Internet has brought a revolution in the world. what are the advantages and disadvantages of internet?

World
Wide Web has created
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evolution in the field of technology and communication. There are many positives and negative factors to
this
internet era.
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essay will discuss both views with examples. Today we cannot even think of a day without
web
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facility,
moreover
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every aspect of
this
modern
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word
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is directly or indirectly controlled by it. We can communicate
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any person anywhere in the
world
in
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short span. We have different modes like video, voice, conference calls, virtual communications, which has made life easier in the unforeseen lockdowns and restrictions due to
pandemic
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. Another main advantage is the availability of resources at
fingertip
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, learners have
opportunity
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to get any information about any subject, mostly free of cost.
However
, the technology can be a curse too, if it is not properly utilized. Data security is a major concern and data breach is
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main business in today’s
world
. The social media apps were are using may be a facilitator and entertainment medium, but
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we are exposing our self to the
world
and being more vulnerable to hackers and data manipulators.
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many new lifestyle health issues
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been evolved out of
this
, Vision and hearing problems in children due to
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of
the
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electronic devices for
prolonged
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period. Posture and migraine problems in adults due to radiations and
over dependence
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on
internet
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. To conclude, the evolution of communication technology has both advantages and disadvantages,
hence
a wise use of the same will help to live a better life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • revolution
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • easy access
  • information
  • communication
  • online shopping
  • banking
  • entertainment
  • multimedia
  • online learning
  • education
  • global connectivity
  • addiction
  • time-wasting
  • privacy
  • security concerns
  • misinformation
  • fake news
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • health issues
  • digital divide
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