You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: explain what you like bout the cafeteria say what is wrong suggest how it could be improved

Hello sir/ madam,

This

is James Austin

third

-year student of

this

college studying in the political science batch .I am writing on the behalf of student union regarding the cafeteria of the college.

This

letter is to inform the management that though the ambience and seating area of

this

cafe is quite good but there are certain points that I want that college authorities should pay attention

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Firstly

, the quality of food or snacks served there is not of good quality, a number of students have complained regarding stomachache after having lunch at

this

place.

Moreover

, the cook on the premises doesn’t use all safety measures related to hygiene.

Lastly

,the most important thing is that cutlery or plates used for serving snacks in the canteen should disposable.

Further

,there is a suggestion by the majority of students protein diet and salads should be added to the menu.Major consideration should be given to the health of students. Hope you will take interest in my suggestions for the improvement of the cafeteria. Yours thankfully,

Jagjot

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Jagjit

Kaur.