Some believe that people should make efforts to fight climate change while others think it is better to learn to live with it.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Some people believe that they should take steps to battle
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climate change,
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, others
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that it is not their matter of concern and should leave as it is. I advocate that small changes in human activities can save the earth from the bad energies of global warming. In
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can make big alter, even though climate change is a natural process. On the one hand,
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differ in environmental weather making life difficult and
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in different ways, few
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that it is out of control and can not make any progress.
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, many creatures are in endanger stage.
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, it is a part of natural transformation and probably not changeable.
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as volcano, tsunami, earthquake these are a form of natural calamities and happens as a part of its progression
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because of human activities, so it should
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as it is. On the
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, many argue that
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is an effect of luxurious standard of living and if the way of living style is changed, it can be minimized up to some extent. Man can contribute their interest by requesting the government to make certain strong rules and regulate them
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, support scientists and encourage them to research more on how to reduce the consequences of global warming, and technologists to invent new technology. Which can stop the bad effect
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the atmosphere.
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,
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of
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should take part in saving
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the earth
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from environmental imbalance. The Tesla car can be taken as a sample, which is run by batteries that do not emit carbon gas. In conclusion,
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the actions of mankind discharge little or no carbon gas in
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comparison
to what amount natural disasters emit, it can be managed by human power since they are able to think innovatively and invent new technology that could lessen the impact.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • mitigate
  • renewable energy
  • afforestation
  • sustainable practices
  • extreme weather events
  • carbon emissions
  • infrastructure
  • agricultural practices
  • moral responsibility
  • ecosystems
  • green jobs
  • economic growth
  • job losses
  • poverty alleviation
  • quality of life
  • proactive measures
  • balanced approach
  • green technology
  • unavoidable impacts
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