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You are currently trying to improve your knowledge of a language which is not your first language. You have a friend who speaks this language fluently. You have decided to write to this friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you want to improve your knowledge of this language ask him/her for suggestions on how to learn more quickly propose that you meet your friend to talk about it

#language #first #friend #suggestions
Hello Dave, Hope you are doing well and everything is well on your side.
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 been
long
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 time since we have met each other.I m writing
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 on
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 behalf as you know my command
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 the English language is not so good .
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, there are so many grammatical mistakes I make during
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 and I m having an important interview for the job for that I have to prepare a presentation for marketing my product so
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 of good vocabulary would create a lasting impression on the management. You were having very good communication skills during college times it’s my humble request if could guide me
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 material to follow so that I can improve my language skills. If possible I want that we should meet in person as I can discuss everything in
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 and
you
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you'll
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ll
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 be able to guide me better in
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 current situation I m going through.Your suggestions would be quite valuable to me. Hope
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we'll
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 be able to plan our meeting soon. Yours lovingly,
Jagjot
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Jagjit
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