Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, technology is playing a greater and greater role in any
kinds
of Fix the agreement mistake
kind
activities
. Fix the agreement mistake
activity
Everyday
Replace the word
Every day
people
use their smartphones or laptops and look for the latest information. Traditional
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The traditional
method
of reading news remained in the past, but Fix the agreement mistake
methods
still
there are Add a comma
,still
people
who believe that newspapers
are useful to
.
Replace the word
too
To begin
with, in the past century newspapers
played indispensable
role as a source of information, nowadays plenty of things has changed, Add an article
an indispensable
people
prefer to surf the Internet or to watch a TV than reading papers. As a result
, newspaper
has lost Add an article
the newspaper
it’s
popularity since technological progress Replace the word
its
have
provided Change the verb form
has
people
with new opportunities for discovering the changes in the world. It is obviously
that online reading has many benefits, Replace the word
obvious
such
as convenience and bunch of information on any topics, meanwhile
Add a comma
,meanwhile
newspapers
are a bit limited with its variety.
Recently people
faced with
many environmental issues which are caused by human activity. If humans want to prevent global problems they should find alternatives to everyday items Change preposition
apply
such
as newspapers
. A great example of preventing paper waste showed UAE
government, they strongly recommended Correct article usage
the UAE
to use
kindle books at schools Change the verb form
using
instead
of traditional. They also
gave each student a laptop to use it
during lessons or to find some specific facts. Correct pronoun usage
apply
This
trick made educational
process even more entertaining and less harmful to the environment.
To sum up, I totally disagree that Add an article
the educational
newspapers
are the main source of knowledge and I don’t see any necessity of using them. There are host
of choices Add an article
a host
which
are suitable, modern and even helpful enough.Correct pronoun usage
that
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