univerity students are incresingly stydying abroad as part of their studies.do the advantages outweight the disadvantages?

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Studying abroad has increased over the years for university students,we will discuss the advantages and
disvantages
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disadvantages
advantages
of the same. Overall the number of enrollments to institutions of higher learning overseas has
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increased because parents believe education abroad is better and of high quality.There are few advantages to
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trend,the mode of learning is very different from
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practised back at home,the length of study is considered shorter compared to the native
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a student who has gone through university and acquired a bachelors degree could need
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or two years to complete their masters
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is not the case especially from my home country a student will have to work for
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the masters class,another primary reason for sending learners overseas could be they are in a position to earn as they study
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makes work easier for the
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guardian
whereby a burden is lifted,universities outside the country allow 40working hours for scholars whereas in my
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chance hardly comes by, because to start with the jobs are not even available,so the guardian is
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on all corners.
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there are
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of the same,the graduates at the birth land are able to cater for school fees in instalment,and can opt for a shorter course as they forge forward to their goal,family and friends are always close and
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of a need help is easily established,
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if a
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does not have school fees it is easy to source it from relatives in a simple yet faster way. In conclusion place of origin is good for higher learning ,but away from home is better considering the benefits that come along
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jobs are easily secured and
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of living is high but again manageable.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Immerse
  • Broaden perspectives
  • Globalized job market
  • International networks
  • Financial strain
  • Cultural shock
  • Homesickness
  • Adapting to cultural norms
  • Educational systems
  • Teaching styles
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